Wednesday, 26 February 2014

Group Critique


When we had our presentation I knew straight away that I wasn't happy with my image. When the rest of the group had to explain what narrative they could see, it confirmed that my message hadn't come across very well. Most people couldn't see the 'train watch' sign and the ones that did, didn't know what the sign meant and the narrative that was seen by most was the journey of others. 




I think this will be the end of this particular idea as I wasn't happy with any of my images and I don't particularly want to go back and keep taking photos. I know for the second part of the assignment I want to pursue the docks idea as I will have enough time and I want to stick to it now. Even if I get another idea I am only going to go down to the docks and keep photographing until I find something I am happy with.

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